Christon's first attempt to re-write a story. The original title of the story book is 'I Love Rocks', he changed it to 'I love Seashells'. In the beginning he wasn't sure how to re-write it, I helped him a little and he managed to finish re-write the whole story.
I love Seashells
Re-write by Christon Chua
I love collecting seashells.
I like to keep them in a container.
I look left, I look right.
I find seashells wherever I am at the beach.
I can't carry all my seashells.
So I put some on my bookshelves.
I find some seashells by the ocean.
That is where I found these ten.
I like to show seashells to my friends.
This one is big and bend.
This one is yellow and has dots.
This one's colourful, blue and purple.
This one just feels smooth to touch.
Now I have so many seashells, I will need a bigger container.
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